I found your writing very powerful and evocative. You have a distinctive voice. It can take a while to gain traction here on Medium – but people will see your writing overtime. If you would like to find an audience a little faster, I can recommend to submit a piece to a publication. A literary one like The Junction or LitUp is relatively easy to submit to. That’s how I have been able to grow here on Medium.
I hope you keep writing. All the best